The Secret Agent Files: Notes about Agenting

By Susan Wroble

“Why,” asked a woman near me, “is it so very hard now to find agents who want to represent picture books? I can find plenty of agents for Middle Grade and YA, even for graphic novels and author/illustrator books. But finding one to come to our conference that represent author-only picture books is getting really tough.”

It was a great question, and was addressed to an industry panel during the Regional Team meeting of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Editors in New York in October. Our chapter has the same problem. We have lots of members who write picture books, but finding agents who would be good fits for our conferences and who are also open to picture book submissions is hard.

The answer, of course, was money. Stacey Barney is an Associate Publisher at Nancy Paulson Books, an imprint of Penguin Random House. She explained that picture books simply make less money than other formats for everyone involved, including the agents. It doesn’t mean that you can’t find an agent for a picture book. It does mean—like so much else in this industry—that it takes persistence.

Writers often talk about their “training books,” the first books they wrote when they were learning the process. Almost always, those books are languishing in some file, never having made it to print. But Stacey talked about an entirely different set of training books as she explained the publisher’s ‘Rule of Three.’ “You start by buying a book you love,” she explained, “and you build up a good rapport with the author. By the time you get to their third book, you have established the author in this industry. The first and second books are like a training camp. They won’t be break-out best-sellers. With the third, the author has arrived.” That means that an author’s beloved debut novel—the one that finally made it to print after writing a few others—is, for the publisher, just the first of the training books. For me, that comment explained a lot about agents’ and publishers’ desires to help build a career, not publish one book.

A week later, I attended an agent panel put on virtually by SCBWI Metro New York that provided additional insights into the author/agent relationship. One question asked of each of the three agents (Saba Sulaiman at Talcott Notch, Linda Camacho at Galt & Zacher, and Eve Adler at Red Fox Literary) was how they got their clients. Surprisingly, meeting someone in person at a conference was low on each list. However, the majority of clients came in through the query inbox. The catch is that many agents are closed, with the only way to submit through attending a conference or workshop. So those conferences and events remain an essential way to reach agents.

Given that, it may seem that cost is a barrier to entry, but that isn’t necessarily true. The panel I attended was free. More than five hundred people signed up. And each of the agents who presented has opened their submissions to all attendees at the panel if they have works that fit.

The panel’s moderator was Harold Underdown, Executive Editor at Kane Press and creator of The Purple Crayon website, a gold mine of information on children’s publishing. Harold asked the agents about recent developments in the industry, and the answer was fascinating… they recommended leaning into the weird. Specifically, they noted that neat genre categories are blurring. Saba Sulaiman noted that “there is a thirst for stories that blur genre, like a horror comedy. We want the weird!” Linda Camacho backed this up, saying that “there is a need for escapism, and a thirst for horror and for romance. Blurring genres tends to provide more avenues for creativity.” As an example of blurred genre in picture books, Saba recommended looking at Ryan T. Higgins We Don’t Eat Our Classmates. “It’s a totally unexpected dinosaur book, that funny, sweet, cute and is also a first day of kindergarten book.”

Harold also asked about tips and best practices in terms of searching for an agent. Some of the best resources are agency websites, SCBWI’s Essential Guide, Manuscript Wishlist, and Query Tracker. In addition, Saba recommended getting a short-term subscription ($25 for one month) or a limited subscription ($10 for a day) to Publisher’s Marketplace.  And then, she suggested, pay attention to the pitches. “It’s a great way to learn how to pitch a book.”

And that may be a great way to land one of those elusive agents!

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What I’m doing now: Wrestling With Feedback

By Rondi Sokoloff Frieder

“I love that part!”

“Really? It didn’t work for me.”

Last summer, I attended “The Whole Novel Workshop” on the idyllic campus of the Highlights Foundation in the Pocono Mountains of Pennsylvania. I brought along a middle-grade manuscript that had been revised numerous times, and got ready to make it sparkle and shine.

Before we got started, one of our faculty members gave us an introductory pep talk. “Just so you know,” she began. “All of you will have to rewrite your books. This is why you are here. But don’t worry, you can do it.” Most of us had to be thinking the same thing: “Maybe some people have to redo the entire thing, but my book is amazing. It just needs a few tweaks and a bit of trimming.” To this I now say, LOL!

Despite my overconfidence, I decided to open my mind to possibility. I listened to the suggestions of my Brain Trust partners and marveled at the insights of our well-published faculty. I threw myself into the writing exercises that revealed twists and turns I hadn’t considered. I reworked my plot. I played around with present vs past tense. And most importantly, I thought long and hard about the crucial themes in this story. What did my protagonist really want?

When I got home, I continued the work. I eliminated unnecessary characters (at least four), I changed the personalities of two of my secondaries, and enhanced components of the story that would make it funnier. Then, after months and months of revising, I gave this new draft to my always brilliant SCBWI critique group, The Story Spinners. My husband and son also volunteered to read the book, and I sent ten pages and a synopsis to an agent who was doing critiques at the RMC-SCBWI fall conference. The book was definitely stronger, but there were new elements that needed to be evaluated. I was too close to the story to know if they were working. While I waited for my readers to plow through the manuscript, I threw myself into another project.

A month later, the feedback began to roll in. And while there was a great deal of consensus, my readers also had conflicting responses. This was when the “wrestling” part of the revision process set in. Who should I believe?

This is the nature of critique. Some comments will be subjective while others will be quite valid. Here’s the rule of thumb: if something in your manuscript is bothering three or four readers, you must consider making the changes. But, if you really want to keep this section in your book, you must make it stronger. For example, one of my critique partners loves when my main character hears his deceased great-grandfather’s voice in his head. But another reader said it didn’t add anything to the story and that I should cut it. I wrestled with the possibilities. Hmm, what to do? Well, I also love the voice of the great-grandfather. Only this feedback let me know that if I want it to stay in the book, I need to amp it up and make it a more integral part of the story.

There were also sections of the book that were flagged by a reader who had a particular expertise. My sporty son said one of the baseball scenes was unrealistic. Another said a parade would never be in the late afternoon. They both had very good points. I fixed both of these things immediately.

But the most important thing I did as I “wrestled with feedback” was to put the manuscript aside. I did not begin revising for two long weeks. I let my readers’ notes roam around in my subconscious and take shape. I also took a lot of deep breaths! Because getting feedback on your creative work can be extremely overwhelming and downright discouraging. Taking a break from the “noise” helped me get back to work with a more positive outlook. I was also more open to making the changes I was resistant to when I first heard them.

Eventually, I was ready to dig in. I pulled up the line edits and read each and every one. I considered all the possibilities and made choices. I finished the revision. Then I sent it off to one more trusted reader – a person who has not read the entire book. He will see it with fresh eyes. Some of his comments will resonate, some will not. I will wrestle with this. Because this is what writers do. We write, get feedback, and rewrite. And as the author who coached us at Highlights said, I CAN do this. And so can you.

 

 

 

 

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Lessons from the Booksellers

By Susan Wroble

Over the summer, I had the opportunity to attend three different events hosted by the Rocky Mountain Chapter of SCBWI that focused on relationships with booksellers. First, RMC’s Perfect Partners webinar featured a panel of five local Indie booksellers:

Later in the summer, the chapter’s PAL (published and listed) group gathered at the Wandering Jellyfish bookstore for a session hosted by Jerilyn Patterson and Carissa Mina. Finally, the RMC Northern Colorado Connect hosted author Susan Kusel, who has held jobs as both a librarian and book buyer, focused on how your book gets into bookstores and libraries.

The three events differed in scope but complemented and built on each other. The biggest takeaway? As Jerilyn Patterson noted, “The big A can’t do community.” That’s the role and the benefit of Indies.

Indie Bookstores and Bookshop.org:

If you are looking for independent bookstores, search IndieBound. Type in a city or a zip code, and you’ll get a map and list of all the local Indies.

Once you know the Indies around you, start using Bookshop. Bookshop.org launched just before Covid as an alternative to Amazon for socially conscious shoppers, and their platform was instrumental in helping Indies survive the pandemic shutdowns.

As an author or illustrator, you can set up a Bookshop link—but don’t! As a creator, you will get back only a very small percentage back on each sale from Bookshop. But if you have an Indie sell your books through Bookshop links, they earn 30% on each sale. That is enough to make a huge difference in their bottom line, and helps keeps these stores stay afloat. Here are the takeaways:

  • As an author or illustrator, select and work with a local Indie. Have the buying link on your website for your books go to that Indie’s bookshop page.
  • When you want to buy a book, go to Bookshop.org, click on “choose a bookstore” on their top menu, and from their map of participating bookstores in that area, click on “Support this Shop!”
  • Don’t post Indie buying links in the same post as Amazon buying links. Amazon already sells 60% of books in the US with a growing market share, and the Indies need all our support.

Developing Relationships with Bookstores:

  • Follow bookstores and engage with them on social media. This engagement can be as simple as taking a selfie outside of their store, perhaps with a book that you bought. Respond to their posts with a share or a comment or an emoji.
  • Attend events at the bookstores.
  • Email or text or message and social media the bookstore to introduce yourself, or talk to them while you are there—they want to hear from you. Megan E. Freeman, RMC Webinar Coordinator, recommends bookstore tourism, visiting Indie bookstores at each place you travel!
  • If you can go into the store in person, give advance notice. This allows them to round up your books to sign—and perhaps, given enough advance notice order additional books for signing.
  • Follow the Indies not only in your area, but also in the area where you grew up. As Susan Kusel noted, developing a relationship at the bookstore near where your mother lives is especially important, because family friendships lead to book purchases!
  • SWAG: Bookmarks are the best. Bookstores can set out your bookmarks on the counter and put them in books in a similar genre to promote your book. Temporary tattoos or stickers are also really popular. Don’t send postcards—the bookstores can’t really do anything with them.
  • Bookstores work with publishing sales reps to order books. If you would like local bookstores to carry your books, you need to notify them very early in the process (as soon as you know release dates and long before the actual release), so that they can order copies.

Launches and Events at Bookstores:

  • Visit all the local bookstores and explain that you are a local author with a book coming out. Give an ARC (Advanced Reader Copy) if possible. Shelf Awareness has free newsletters about newly released books and the book industry. Indie bookstores can tailor the copy of Shelf Awareness that they send to their mailing lists, and they will often tailor that to highlight local authors and illustrators.
  • Select one local Indie as the one you will feature to pre-order signed copies that buyers can pick up in the store, or have mailed from there. Use that bookstore for your book launch.
  • If possible, set up a date to go into the bookstore in advance of your event to plan things out.
  • Work with the bookstore to develop a plan for your event—and it needs to be an event, not just a book signing. Brainstorm activities with the booksellers for events that could generate excitement.
  • Tie the event into your book. For example, Megan E. Freeman, whose middle grade book ALONE is in free verse, held a poetry workshop, and Kaz Windness, whose picture book book SWIM, JIM! is about overcoming fears, hosted a pool party parade.
  • Public speaking can be scary. Consider joining Toastmasters if you need practice in engaging your audience.
  • Publicize your event—bookstores do a lot of different events, so they need your audience. The most successful events are a true partnership. There are events where no one shows up, and the difference between those events and the highly engaged ones is often the amount of advance planning.
  • Celebrate the release of a paperback version as if it is a brand-new book, and plan events.

A Few Notes on Libraries:

Unlike bookstores, libraries are ordering books much later in the release process, often after the books have been released and almost always after the initial reviews have come out.

  • Request that your local library carry your books. It is perfectly acceptable for an author or illustrator to submit a request for their own books—and you can have your friends ask too!

Book Reviews:

Posting a supportive book review is a fabulous way to support other creatives, and it can lead to more sales at bookstores. Goodreads is the world’s largest site for book recommendations. It is owned by Amazon, and you can post the same review in both places. You can post reviews on Amazon without buying the book from them. Collect good karma and post, post, post!

  • As you read mentor texts and comp titles, post reviews of the books you enjoy.
  • Post reviews of books from any group you are in (critique groups, debut groups, SCBWI groups, classes…)
  • If you have friends writing work-for-hire (WFH), post reviews of those books as well. They don’t tend to get reviewed, but those rare reviews are incredible gifts, because they can be used in the author’s press kit and promotional materials.

Looking forward to hearing tips from others — please add your suggestions in the comments!

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Revising OUT LOUD!

By Rondi Sokoloff Frieder

Ever since I made the decision to become a serious writer, members of my family have asked me to edit their writing projects. I have said yes to college essays, business presentations, and even a Master’s thesis. But before I ever agree to do this, I always require the writer use one important self-editing tool – they must read their work out loud! They can read it alone in a quiet room or give a dramatic performance for the dog. It doesn’t matter, as long as they do it. This may sound like a common revision strategy to those of you who have been writing for a long time. But believe me, many people skip this step.

You can begin by reading whatever you have written out loud to yourself. It’s amazing how helpful this is, particularly for creating snappy dialogue and getting rid of repetitive words. You should also record yourself using the Voice Memo app on your phone and then listen back. I use this for first pages and sections with high tension. If you are writing a picture book, listening to yourself read the manuscript  will give you a good sense of rhythm, flow, and word choice.

It is also helpful to have someone from your critique group read your story out loud to you. This will help you hear how easily the book can be read by a parent, teacher, or child. But if you are writing something longer, you may want to have your computer read to you.

That’s right, your computer can read!  If you use “Microsoft Word,” this tool can be found in the “Review” section. Just click on “Review” and look for the “Read Aloud” icon in the top menu bar. Most versions allow you to adjust the speed and gender of the voice. I must warn you though, the voice of this reader is quite flat. There will be no emotion expressed, except for a slight shift when the computer comes to a question mark. If this monotone voice annoys you, there are other programs that have more versatility. My son recently bought one called Speechify. Speechify gives you the choice of a variety of voices and accents and has a much more human tone.

Despite its lack of intonation, I find the Microsoft Word “Read Aloud” feature surprisingly helpful. My middle grade novels range from 40,000 to 60,000 words. It would be almost impossible to have another person read an entire book out loud to me. And when you read to yourself, you miss things. Your brain is ahead of your voice and you are much more focused on plot, rather than word choice and repetition. I just finished having my computer read my latest WIP  before sending the manuscript out to my critique group.

 

 

 

Here’s what happened:

  1. I eliminated 4,000 words. Seriously, 4,000!!!! Many were words I used too much throughout the manuscript, or used too many times on a page. The biggest culprits were: I mean, that, you know, today, right, around, about, on, up, down, back, really, but, pull, nod, smile.
  2. I got rid of unnecessary sentences. One of my worst habits is saying something is going to happen and then have it happen. The actual action is almost always enough.
  3. I got rid of entire paragraphs that DID NOT move the story forward. These were often over-descriptions of a setting or character, or a conversation that went on for too long.
  4. I omitted adjectives, especially colors, sizes of things, and over-descriptions of food.
  5. I tightened up punctuation,  eliminating and adding commas, and getting rid of exclamation points!!!!

I also added things:

  1. I enhanced emotional reactions to action, but made sure they were not overly physical.
  2. I added details that clarified information for the reader. Sometimes, these things were in my mind, but not on the page.
  3. I made sure that changes to the story were consistent throughout the manuscript, especially when I eliminated characters.
  4. I added small words that I had accidentally left out, particularly a, the, in, on, to.
  5. This story used to be in past tense, but I switched it to present. When the computer read it to me, I picked up on places I missed making the changes!

As you probably know, this is not the final version of my book. I will be getting another round of feedback from my critique partners in early July.  And after I review their comments, and input the suggestions that resonate, the dog and I will settle back into my studio and have that Microsoft Word lady read the book to me again . OUT LOUD, OF COURSE!

Authors note: I used the “Read Aloud” feature for this blog!

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PBParty — Something to Celebrate!

By Susan Wroble

February 28, 2022. Denver, Colorado.

During our Story Spinners Critique Group, member Beth Duncan asked if anyone was submitting to PBParty. “What’s PBParty?” I asked.

For those of you as in the dark as I was, PBParty is an annual contest for unagented picture book writers and illustrators, hosted by author Mindy Alyce Weiss. Submissions (just the first 70 or so words of manuscripts) are judged, finalists are selected, and agents and editors are invited to look over the entries.

The submissions window, it turned out, was that night. In fact, with the time zone changes, it was just after our meeting ended. I had a very polished manuscript with an accompanying query letter in my files. Why not? I filled out the submission form, pressed send, and promptly forgot about it. Those weeks were a little busy…

 

March 17, 2022. Cerritos, Mexico.

On a beach on west coast of the Baja peninsula, surfers rode into shore, a pelican floated in the pool, and my husband and I were engulfed in hugs as friends began to arrive for our daughter’s wedding that weekend. That’s when, unexpectedly, my phone rang. “Susan!” Beth said. “You’re a PBParty finalist!”

 

 

March 25, 2022. Denver, Colorado

With rather spotty wifi at our hotel (and a few other things going on right then!) it took another week and the return home for me to begin to understand PBParty.

The 2022 team of PBParty judges (Mindy Alyss Weiss, Matt Tesoriero, Gabriele Davis, Lori Degman, Jenna Waldman, Aixa Perez-Prado, and Sylvia Chen) sifted through nearly a thousand submissions to select the finalists: fifty manuscripts and twenty in the illustration showcase. Those were posted on a site for agents and editors to review. If the editors and agents were interested, they would request the full manuscript or portfolios. Over on the PBParty Facebook site, it was hard to keep up as Mindy posted requests. By the end of the week, more than FIVE HUNDRED had come in!

Not everyone got a request, some got many. And this is where Mindy’s magic really shines. From those who never heard anything, to those who signed with agents and editors, to those (like me) still on the journey waiting to hear back to find out if their work will be picked up—every one of us felt like a winner. The Facebook community of past and present finalists was always there to answer questions, support, commiserate, and celebrate. To call PBParty a contest is not doing it justice. Mindy has achieved something far more difficult. She creates community. And that is truly something to celebrate!

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Pick Yourself Up, Dust Yourself Off…

I don’t know about you, but I’ve been feeling a little discouraged lately.

I started querying in 2016, admittedly too early. But I’ve been working ever since, creating new stories, revising, submitting, attending workshops and webinars, getting critiques, and revising again. I feel great about several of my stories that I know are really strong. And yet I counted the other day – I’ve sent out over 100 queries and am still unagented. Now, that’s over 8 different stories, and some of them definitely weren’t quite ready for primetime. And still. It feels like I’ve been doing this forever.

Anyone who’s been in the querying trenches for a while knows that it’s a windy, switchback-filled highway of emotions. There can be the highest of highs (a request to see more manuscripts! A revise and resubmit! A positive critique from someone you really admire!) and some pretty low lows (ANOTHER form rejection? A not-so-positive critique?). How do you manage these feelings and keep heading toward your desired destination – representation and publication – when it feels like there are so many roadblocks along the way?

Here are a few things I’ve come up with – but I’d love to hear what solutions you’ve found to keep things running!

Talk to your critique group/community of writers

My fellow Story Spinners always  make me feel good about my writing and that it’s worth it to keep going. Also, cheering for them helps me feel more excited about my own journey – we can do it, together!

Find a great craft webinar to get your engine revving.

I’ve taken some great webinars from The Highlights Foundation, The Writing Barn, and SCBWI, of course. Those always seem to leave me feeling excited and renenergized – at least for a while!

Grey kitty with wide-open eyes sitting on a colorful carpet and looking directly at the camera.

No matter what I do, Pip will always be proud of me. And a little surprised at my existence, honestly.

Take some time off if you need to.

The pandemic was hard for me, as I’m sure it was for all of us. I didn’t do as much writing as I hoped to do – and that’s okay. Unless you’ve made a commitment to someone else to produce something, take a break if you need to. It’s okay. Try again tomorrow. And then, even if all you do is open your document and change 3 words, you’ve done something.

Remind yourself how far you’ve come! Celebrate! 

Celebrate the little accomplishments! I never thought I’d have this many stories done – much less stories that I feel really proud of. I never thought I would find such a wonderful community of writers. I never would have imagined I’d have actually sent out 100 queries. Even if they haven’t resulted in signing with an agent, it’s a big thing to have achieved! I’ve NOT given up! That’s a big deal!

What do YOU do? Please share in the comments!

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Hope for the Future: Book Review of “Energy from the Earth” by Susan Wroble

As greenhouse gases warm the planet and the climate crisis looms, students are understandably concerned about the future. Students wonder what can be done to reduce dependence on fossil fuels and what the future of energy will look like. Susan Wroble’s new book Energy from the
Earth (part of an educational series titled “Energy for the Future”) offers positive information and hope to students. Her book focuses on geothermal energy and how it can be an important part of our energy future.

The author, Susan Wroble, one of my critique partners and fellow “Story Spinner,” has a passion for teaching science and writing children’s books. Her concise, information-rich book offers an introduction to alternative energy. The overall tone of the book is positive, looking indepth at fossil fuel alternatives to combat climate change.

Aimed at the elementary school reader, the language is simple and specific, making difficult concepts accessible. Interesting photographs, explanatory diagrams, and informative sidebars enhance the text and draw the reader into the topic.

The book explains that geothermal energy makes use of the vast amount of heat under the surface of the earth. Scientists have learned how to tap into this heat and use it as an alternative energy source. This clean, renewable energy is making scientific advances and is growing in popularity. Young readers are given an up-close look at how geothermal energy is created, harnessed, and used. Emphasizing the need for sustainable energy, the book offers specific historical examples and highlights various geothermal technologies.

As a literacy tool, the book contains all the elements of non-fiction, including a table of contents, pictures with captions, labeled diagrams, a glossary, and an index. A short quiz tests for comprehension and the book includes resource material for students inspired to learn more. It is an excellent classroom resource, both for the science information it imparts and for its use in teaching about non-fiction books.

The Next Generation Science Standards requires the nation’s 4th grade students focus on “Energy,” including alternative energy. Energy from the Earth is a valuable introductory resource for students to learn more about the science and engineering behind geothermal energy.

Congratulations to Susan on the publication of her first children’s book!

The book is available at your local, independent bookstore (special order) or online at:
https://www.amazon.com/Energy-Earth-Future-Susan-Wroble/dp/1637390580

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The Joy of New Tires

By Rondi Sokoloff Frieder

In January, I realized I needed new tires for my car. The original factory-installed set was wearing thin and it was time to upgrade. Since I drive back and forth to the mountains every week, I was particularly interested in finding a brand that performed well in the Colorado snow and ice. My husband did some research and found rave reviews for the Michelin Cross Climate+. They’re apparently made of a softer rubber and have a unique tread that’s designed to literally push the snow out of your way. They sounded perfect, so we ordered them.

Every February, the CCIRA (Colorado Council of the International Reading Association) hosts its annual conference. I love this conference. I loved it when I attended it as a first grade teacher, and I love it now as a volunteer for the Rocky Mountain Chapter of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (RMC-SCBWI). For three days, I host a table of local authors and illustrators who share their books with teachers and librarians.

I also moderate a panel of these incredible local celebrities!   

The enthusiasm for literacy at this event is off the charts. Renowned speakers from near and far regale attendees with innovative ways to teach reading and writing to children. Close to a thousand teachers and librarians gather in workshops and banquet halls to discuss their struggles and triumphs in the classroom. And everyone, I mean everyone, is newly inspired.

For the past seven years, CCIRA was held at a hotel, five minutes from my house. It was one of the reasons I agreed to take on this volunteer position. But this year, the venue had changed. My drive would now be a little over a half hour. Except… here’s the thing… it always snows during this conference. Always. It might be a light dusting or a full-out blizzard. There was no way to know what would happen. But the snow rarely affected me. I LIVED FIVE MINUTES AWAY. But this was no longer the case. And as the conference drew near, I began to worry about my commute. Finally, I decided the best thing I could do to alleviate my fears was to reserve a hotel room for Wednesday and Thursday nights.

On the Sunday before the conference, there was good news. The forecast for Wednesday and Thursday was for sunny weather and unseasonably high temperatures. I was psyched, elated, energized! I canceled my hotel reservations. The roads were predicted to be clear and dry.

On Wednesday, I drove to the hotel in record time, set up my table, and greeted my fellow exhibitors. On Thursday, the sky was a bright blue and I got to the hotel without a glitch. Sun poured into the Exhibits Hall through floor to ceiling windows, creating a cheerful mood. Teachers and librarians stopped by our table to chat. Our authors and illustrators pitched their gorgeous books, handed out door prizes, and posed for photos with their adoring fans. My panel of fifteen authors and illustrators wowwed and zowwed the crowd with lyrical readings and articulate answers to thought-provoking questions And when I drove home that night, a colorful sunset dipped below the majestic Rocky Mountains.

But when I woke up on Friday, the weather had shifted. A gray haze loomed over those very same mountains. Snow was predicted for later in the day. After lunch, scattered flurries were spotted through the windows behind our table. Many of the exhibitors decided to leave early to beat the storm. I decided to follow suit and began packing up. Only by the time I was finished, the storm was in full force. I trudged to the parking lot and had to use my scraper to push off the three inches that already accumulated. And when I pulled up to the door of the hotel to load my boxes and bid farewell to my fellow exhibitors, there were hugs and exclamations of “See you next year!” and “Drive safe!” I scraped the additional snow that now covered my windshield, put my wipers on high, and merged onto the packed highway. The traffic was horrendous – a sea of cars and trucks moving at a snail’s pace while fat flakes flew at us like white bullets.

Only something was different. I felt unusually secure on the road. No sliding, no skidding, no getting stuck. I crept along, slow but steady. It was the tires! The zigzaggy Michelin Cross Climate+ tires really did push the snow out of my way. I was going to be okay. I would make it home. Don’t get me wrong, it took me almost two hours. But I got there without a problem, thanks to my new tires. So, you may ask, will I attend this conference again next year despite its distance from my house? I will! But I’ll also reserve a hotel room for Friday night – just in case there’s an even bigger storm!

 

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Kids Love Nonfiction

By Susan Wroble, February 2022

Valentine’s Day was the official launch of a project near to my heart — the #KidsLoveNonfiction Campaign. Mary Ann Cappiello, Professor of  Language and Literacy at Lesley University, and Xenia Hadjioannou, Associate Professor of Language and Literacy Education at the Harrisburg Campus of Penn State University, released a letter to the New York Times requesting that the paper add lists of bestselling children’s nonfiction.

All too often, the adult book-buying public is trapped by their own childhood experiences. Their belief can be summed in the title of an article in December 2020 by Washington Post education columnist Jay Mathews: “Will my grandkids still love me if I buy them nonfiction?”

For most kids, the answer to that question is “Yes.”

Kindergarten teacher Marlene Correia realized that most of the books she read to her class were nonfiction. Then she started paying attention to the books they checked out of the school library. For nineteen weeks, she tracked the data. She discovered that for 14 of those weeks (74% of the time!), her students checked out a greater number of nonfiction and informational fiction books over fiction. (Informational fiction has facts, but also made-up parts — a great example is Adam Rex’s picture book Pluto Gets the Call, where the planet does the talking!)

Another study followed 4-7 years olds—and again found that this age group, despite being the ago of make-believe, had a strong preference for stories that were true. Author Melissa Stewart,  who writes the incredible Celebrate Science blog, notes that 40% of elementary children prefer nonfiction, which another 30% prefer nonfiction and fiction equally.

So for The New York Times, it’s time. Time to support the books that kids love. Time to let the grown-ups know that kids love them. Time to align your children’s bestseller lists with the adult lists, highlighting both fiction and nonfiction and put a spotlight on the incredible nonfiction available to kids today.

And for everyone else, if you are interested in adding your support, you can sign your name to the letter (your email address will remain private). The kids will thank you!

 

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Writing Alone, But Together

I’m done. No, not with my revising. Darn it. But, even better, at least from my birds-eye view: I’m done trying to feel like a writer and I am darn giddy to report that I no longer imagine suppose-to’s, like cozying up my studio or writing at coffee shops. No more! For the past few years, I have been a writer; I have kept my behind in a chair. Yes, I still slug through, mumble ugh, write total crap… Doesn’t matter. I am writing!

I know I’m not the only writer who has tried to feel like one. Maybe I’m growing up as a writer. Hear ye! Finally. Oh, I have a long, long way to learn. But I am saving a lot of time – getting right to writing, instead of fussing with lighting candles (great if helps you!). Now, I arrive at one of my favorite writing spots – my studio or kitchen table – and do my quick set-up: cups of java and water to left of laptop, paper and pen to right, blanket o’er my lap, timer set. By the way, my red-black plaid blanket is full of childhood stories from when I would use it to build forts, watch tv, trick ‘n tease with my brothers.

A brief trip back to those days… I always needed complete quiet to do my homework. I vividly, fondly recall high school nights – my brother Jim at one end of our long Formica kitchen table, me at the other. We read, took notes and penned essays in silence, while our dad was at his second job, our mom and youngest brother sound asleep, our oldest brothers away at college. Even though Jim was a quick study, whipping through homework while jotting social plans, he always checked in with me. It was as if he knew the exact moment I got restless, started daydreaming. “How ya doing, kid?” he would say. Whether I grumbled frustration or not a word, he would smirk, jump up and open the fridge. Message: Let’s take a break together.

Together. Today, I still need complete quiet when I write (and lotsa jumping up, taking breaks!) and to be with other writers. I prefer writing alone, but together. So, that’s what I’ve created for myself – being with other writers, being held accountable. Every week, I get and give plenty of “how ya doing?” check in’s and everyone is a-okay with a short answer or not a word. We’re sticking together.

Here’s my list of formal and informal sessions that keep my behind in my chair. There are plenty more, including for writers who prefer chatting, music, dogs barking, prompts… You go! My sessions – with strangers or writer friends – guarantee someone is at the other end of “the table” and we’re together writing in silence. And, I get to stay in my favorite spot! May you, too, find your table and whoever you need at the other end.

Virtual Sessions: Writers from across the globe, including many U.S. SCBWI members.

Writers’ Hour https://writershour.com/

3 times daily Monday-Friday

The Chicago Writers Circle meetup.com/The-Chicago-Writer-s-Circle

1 time daily Sunday-Saturday

My (Private) Writing Session:

Text Partner: I write with a long-time writer friend minimum twice weekly. We text at start and end. Revs my creativity and writing!

My Accountability:

  • Monday Morning E-mail: I exchange weekly goals and accomplishments with other children’s writers. Keeps me honest, nudges me.
  • YA Accountability Partner: Email and phone call meetings. Motivating!
  • Story Spinner SCBWI Critique Group: We meet twice monthly for feedback on manuscripts, query letters, ideas, outlines, research, etc. Can’t imagine writing without them!!
  • SCBWI British Isles Group: E-mail check ins. Inspiring!

 

I am writing the success of my every breath.
–Mahogany L. Browne, award-winning author of CHLORINE SKY and other YA novels, board books

I have never heard a more eloquent silence.

–Laurie Halse Anderson, award-winning author of SPEAK and other YA novels, picture books

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