Monthly Archives: April 2023

Let’s hear it for audio books!

See what I did there?

I have a long commute to work. LONG. Sometimes my trip home takes an hour. So I joke that I get a lot of reading done in the car – via audio books!

Now, if anyone’s ever told you listening to audio books isn’t REAL reading they are 1000% WRONG. The story might be entering your consciousness via your ears instead of your eyes, but the picture it paints for you is the same. The impact can be the same. And if the book is read by a REALLY GOOD voice artist, then it can be even more impactful. Also, this article points out why continuing to question whether or not it’s “real” reading is ableist.

Anyhoo, here are a few middle grade books I’ve read (via audiobook) recently and LOVED:

Finally Seen by Kelly Yang; audiobook read by Cindy Kay

I ADORE Kelly Yang’s Front Desk series. This book, a standalone, may outshine that series for me. When Lina arrives in the United States after being apart from her parents and younger sister for five years, she is surprised to find that life is nothing like what she imagined – or what her mother told her in letters. Her family is barely getting by, and, after an embarrassing moment in class, Lina decides to never speak at school again. But with the help of a friendly librarian, an understanding friend, and a book that reflects her own experience back to her, she finds the courage to use her voice.

Tumble by Celia C. Pérez; audiobook read by Victoria Villarreal

When Addie Ramirez’s stepfather proposes adopting her, she decides that it’s time she learned more about her biological father – whom she knows very little about. Her hunt leads her to the famous family of luchadores, the Bravos. As Addie gets to know her relatives and learn more about her father, she finds that bringing the two halves of her family together is going to be much harder than she imagined. This is a warm, poignant, funny read.

 

The Last Mapmaker by Christina Soontornvat; audiobook read by Sura Siu

This is a magical fantasy set on the high seas! Twelve-year-old Sai wants nothing more than to leave her low-born status behind – but to do that, she must hide her ancestry and pretend to be high-class. Her work as an assistant to the country’s most celebrated mapmaker might be her best chance to alter her future. And when he is offered the chance to go on a once-in-a-lifetime journey to map the furthest reaches of the world, and decides to take  Sai along, she’s guaranteed a celebrated future. That is – unless anyone finds out her truth.

A Green Velvet Secret by Vicky Grant; audiobook read by Gabi Epstein

Yardley’s best friend, Gidge, is dying of cancer. Gidge also happens to be Yardley’s grandmother, who has decided to use all of her last moments to “fix” her karma by writing letters to everyone she decides she needs to make amends with. Yardley is devastated when Gidge is gone, and remembers her as she helps out in a vintage clothing store Gidge introduced her to not long before passing away. Yardley’s not sure she believes in reincarnation, but when a woman arrives at the shop to pick up a package left for her, and it contains a green velvet dress that once belonged to Gidge, she’s convinced that the woman is Gidge, returned to her. This is a moving story of how we handle grief and remembrance, as well as a twisty mystery. CW: includes assisted suicide.

Cold-Blooded Myrtle by Elizabeth C. Bunce; audiobook read by Bethan Rose Young

If I had to choose ANY genre as my favorite middle grade, I would say it’s “plucky victorian girls solving mysteries and defying gender norms.” The Myrtle Hardcastle series fits that bill – and every book in the series has been delightful. This is the third, and in this outing, Myrtle and her governess set out to find the person who murdered a shopkeeper in his shop on the day he’s to unveil his annual Christmas window display. Twists and turns lead us to the local college belltower, and a ceremony that took place there many years before – and included Myrtle’s own mother.

Witchlings by Claribel Ortega; audiobook read by Cyrina Fiallo

I remember finishing this book and then sitting in my car marveling at how much I loved it. It’s just wonderful, and I CAN’T WAIT for #2 in the series. Seven Salazar knows she’s a witch – she lives in a town of witches and every child at 12 years old participates in a ceremony to be sorted into a coven which will determine what kind of magic they will master. But when the ceremony takes place, Seven is distraught to learn that she is a “spare” – a witch not sorted into any coven who will be treated as an outcast and be stuck in a life of servitude. Seven is determined NOT to accept this fate, so she invokes the “impossible task.” If she and her fellow spares can complete this task they will have a second chance at becoming their own coven and coming into their full powers. But the impossible task is called that for a reason…

What are you listening to and enjoying? Please share!

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QUERY, REVISE, REPEAT

If you glanced at my weekly calendar, you would see time blocks for Research Agents & Query and for Revise. In my weekly goals, I note the number of queries along with the number of pages that I plan to revise. Time blocking makes me show up. Of course, life gets in the way (and I let it!), but I’m proud to report that I have had better-than-ever attendance the past four months. I suspect it’s because sending out queries while deep in the messiness of revising keeps me on my creative toes. Doing both reminds me: I am a writer, I can do this.

Every time I send off a query for my picture book, I feel a loud “YES!” in my writer bones. Yay, my story is out there. And so is my sweat. Each word contains years and years of being turned upside down and inside out. Eventually, I may have to revise my manuscript again. Ugh! I don’t think about that though. I’d rather celebrate that it’s done. For now, it feels great to finally send off 500 words that I care the world about.

Every time I finish revising pages of my YA novel, I feel a huge “I did it!” When a whimper of “I wish I got further” creeps in, I give myself a “you got this!” Yay, my revising is getting there, as I cut, re-arrange, rewrite and enjoy an occasional epiphany when I carve out a new scene or one sentence flows smooth and crisp. It feels great to be close to the finish line of 80,000 words that I think about day and night.

Querying and revising balance my writer mojo. They are yoga. Querying is me following my teacher’s specific instructions. Revising is me slowly sinking into the pose, adjusting my feet, tweaking the shape of my hand, remembering to breathe, and challenging myself to stretch longer, further till gradually, my body does something I never knew possible. Just like my characters do when I follow them. Just like my story flows when I remember to breathe!

Undoubtedly, querying is a refreshing change of pace and motivates me to stay in the revising trenches.

-It’s concrete and point-blank – a healthy break from the land of fiction.

-Researching agents keeps me tuned in to this crazy industry.

-Learning. Helps me update my package for my YA novel (logline, pitch, synopsis, etc.).

-Gives me a sense of completion amid day-after-day plowing through revision.

-Amps up my writer confidence.

Querying is baking. The don’t-deviate exactness of baking pushes me to diligently concentrate, the same way that I follow submission guidelines to a tee. I go to hyper focus mode to get everything right. Recently, for example, an agent’s instructions said to attach picture book manuscripts. I re-read that line several times. Because? All other agents have stated, NO attachments. I do the same when I bake. I re-read each step to make sure I use a teaspoon vs a tablespoon, baking soda vs baking powder, whisk in vs stir in… Like querying, reading baking instructions works my brain muscles. But, what a thrill to pull my cake out of the oven. It’s done. I feel that way after I send off another query. It’s done. Yes, a rejection is a cake gone wrong. It burns me. But, I get to bake another. I get to send out another query. Afterall, I must reach my goal.

Revising is cooking. I prefer cooking, because I get to invent, combine, add another spice and research (what’s a Lepiota mushroom?). I love revising recipes – cutting, adding, switching spices and ingredients… Just like revising my YA. Letting myself play and experiment keeps me energized. For instance, I’ve relied on freewriting dialogue to take my secondary characters from flat cardboard to three-dimensional humans. I’ve resorted to longhand to rewrite highly emotional scenes. My pen makes me slow down the rolling-boil action and grant my character a chance to sit on simmer. What a joy to sit with my characters! I feel that way when I finish cooking, especially a soup that’s simmered all day. Yes, some soups have no zing, just like so many of my sentences.  But, I always return to my writing recipe – Beat Sheets, notes and my synopsis – to stay on track. Then, it’s back to the keyboard. Afterall, I must reach my goal.

Juggling querying and revising doesn’t make this whole writing thing any easier. It’s such hard, hard work. Juggling feeds my creative longing and insatiable curiosity – and by gosh, it gives me hope!

 

Over time, juggling would come to seem slower.  You are doing it.  –Heather Wolf, juggler and author, Birding at The Bridge: In Search of Every Bird on the Brooklyn Waterfont

 

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